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		| derMauersegler   K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
				SHO 
bighearted boy 
spoon-feeding even vampires 
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally 
cigarette clouds conceal his soul
 
(I nearly wrote "cigarette-clouds"    and isn't it actually "big-hearted"   ?)
			
				
(This post was last modified: 10-29-2010, 03:55 AM by derMauersegler.)
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	| 10-29-2010, 03:46 AM |  |  
	
		| mamikochan   Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
				 (10-29-2010, 03:46 AM)derMauersegler Wrote:  SHObig-hearted boy
 spoon-feeding even vampires
 quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally
 cigarette clouds conceal his soul
 
 (I nearly wrote "cigarette-clouds"
  and isn't it actually "big-hearted"  ?) 
argumentative, boisterous, sullen, shy, Crybaby, loving...
 
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yeeesss, but spell check  didn't bop me upside the head, so i let it go.  fixed it so there are 3 lines of hyphenated words.      is that somehow cheating the spirit of the process?  or a handy trick to make things work better?    
maybe i should write Cry-Baby?    
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	| 10-30-2010, 12:08 AM |  |  
	
		| derMauersegler   K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
				 (10-30-2010, 12:08 AM)mamikochan Wrote:  maybe i should write Cry-Baby?    Yesss!!!
 
Sorry for not continuing at the moment, my head is overwhelmed by taking part in NaNoWriMo . It's crazy. Yesterday I invented the car "Tsubasa Automatic"     , a car that can drive all by itself. All streets in Tokio are equipped with sensors now that communicate with certain receivers in the cars   . Speed, distance to other cars and stuff like that are regulated automatically so that you can do other things while the car is driving for you   . Errr... so you see I have a bit of a hard time to concentrate on Sho right now    , but if I need a break from my dubious story I will continue!!!
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	| 11-05-2010, 05:36 AM |  |  
	
		| mamikochan   Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
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	| 11-05-2010, 10:36 AM |  |  
	
		| derMauersegler   K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
				SHO 
big-hearted boy 
spoon-feeding even vampires 
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally 
cigarette clouds conceal his soul 
argumentative, boisterous, sullen, shy, Crybaby, loving... 
creatures of the night know
 
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 ![[Image: nano.png]](http://www.desic.de/nano.png)    
NaNoWriMo - I won! But the problem is... 
... my story is not finished yet    .    |  |  
	| 12-03-2010, 01:45 PM |  |  
	
		| mamikochan   Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
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	| 12-03-2010, 02:58 PM |  |  
	
		| derMauersegler   K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
 
 
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			| RE: Another game, snowball poem 
 
				SHO 
big-hearted boy 
spoon-feeding even vampires 
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally 
cigarette clouds conceal his soul 
argumentative, boisterous, sullen, shy, Crybaby, loving... 
creatures of the night know 
Beware his Shadow's Vengeance! 
When love judges... 
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I'm at over 60.000 words in my novel now and it still doesn't want to end ha ha ha ha ha. Maybe I should have called the 50.000 words Book One and what I am writing now Book Two    . Maybe when I'll review what stuff I've written there I will shrink the whole thing again...
			
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