Another game, snowball poem

mamikochan · 08-11-2010, 01:42 PM

(08-11-2010, 08:08 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: SAMSARA
is like
a meditative breath
of unspoken private feelings
caught in a web of
whispery winter's love made new by
regaining harmony in worlds of
delicate sound and glowing
souls full of

chaste love

cathb · 08-11-2010, 06:30 PM

(08-11-2010, 01:42 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-11-2010, 08:08 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: SAMSARA
is like
a meditative breath
of unspoken private feelings
caught in a web of
whispery winter's love made new by
regaining harmony in worlds of
delicate sound and glowing
souls full of

chaste love

forever.

I think we did a real nice job on this one. Icon_biggrin

mamikochan · 08-11-2010, 08:07 PM

(08-11-2010, 06:30 PM)cathb Wrote:
(08-11-2010, 01:42 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-11-2010, 08:08 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: SAMSARA
is like
a meditative breath
of unspoken private feelings
caught in a web of
whispery winter's love made new by
regaining harmony in worlds of
delicate sound and glowing
souls full of

chaste love

forever.

I think we did a real nice job on this one.

i like it. turned out to be more like the tone of the instrumental than i would have thought. KUDOS!!!! Icon_biggrin

derMauersegler · 08-12-2010, 02:19 AM

VAMPS poem III

SAMSARA
is like
a meditative breath
of unspoken private feelings
caught in a web of
whispery winter's love made new by
regaining harmony in worlds of
delicate sound and glowing
souls full of
chaste love
forever.

Bravo Icon_biggrin

!

Now cathb starts with the first word of the next poem kudasai Icon_3nodding

(the one who ends the last poem always starts with the next one).

cathb · 08-12-2010, 07:13 PM

Ok.....since we did K.A.Z, I guess it is only logical to give Hyde fair poem time. So here is the first line...

Hyde

derMauersegler · 08-13-2010, 06:12 AM

Hyde -
doe eyes

mamikochan · 08-13-2010, 02:43 PM

(08-13-2010, 06:12 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes

cherub's sweet smile

cathb · 08-13-2010, 10:08 PM

(08-13-2010, 02:43 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-13-2010, 06:12 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes

cherub's sweet smile

voice of an angel

mamikochan · 08-13-2010, 10:26 PM

(08-13-2010, 10:08 PM)cathb Wrote:
(08-13-2010, 02:43 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-13-2010, 06:12 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes

cherub's sweet smile

voice of an angel

but enticing tongue of Sin

derMauersegler · 08-14-2010, 03:37 AM

Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents