derMauersegler
K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
Shows: Paris
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
SHO
bighearted boy
spoon-feeding even vampires
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally
cigarette clouds conceal his soul
(I nearly wrote "cigarette-clouds" and isn't it actually "big-hearted" ?)
(This post was last modified: 10-29-2010, 03:55 AM by derMauersegler.)
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10-29-2010, 03:46 AM |
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mamikochan
Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
Shows: BALTIMORE
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(10-29-2010, 03:46 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: SHO
big-hearted boy
spoon-feeding even vampires
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally
cigarette clouds conceal his soul
(I nearly wrote "cigarette-clouds" and isn't it actually "big-hearted" ?)
argumentative, boisterous, sullen, shy, Crybaby, loving...
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yeeesss, but spell check didn't bop me upside the head, so i let it go. fixed it so there are 3 lines of hyphenated words. is that somehow cheating the spirit of the process? or a handy trick to make things work better?
maybe i should write Cry-Baby?
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10-30-2010, 12:08 AM |
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derMauersegler
K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
Shows: Paris
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(10-30-2010, 12:08 AM)mamikochan Wrote: maybe i should write Cry-Baby?
Yesss!!!
Sorry for not continuing at the moment, my head is overwhelmed by taking part in NaNoWriMo. It's crazy. Yesterday I invented the car "Tsubasa Automatic" , a car that can drive all by itself. All streets in Tokio are equipped with sensors now that communicate with certain receivers in the cars . Speed, distance to other cars and stuff like that are regulated automatically so that you can do other things while the car is driving for you . Errr... so you see I have a bit of a hard time to concentrate on Sho right now , but if I need a break from my dubious story I will continue!!!
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11-05-2010, 05:36 AM |
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mamikochan
Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
Shows: BALTIMORE
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
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11-05-2010, 10:36 AM |
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derMauersegler
K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
Shows: Paris
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
SHO
big-hearted boy
spoon-feeding even vampires
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally
cigarette clouds conceal his soul
argumentative, boisterous, sullen, shy, Crybaby, loving...
creatures of the night know
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NaNoWriMo - I won! But the problem is...
... my story is not finished yet .
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12-03-2010, 01:45 PM |
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mamikochan
Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
Shows: BALTIMORE
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
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12-03-2010, 02:58 PM |
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derMauersegler
K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
Shows: Paris
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
SHO
big-hearted boy
spoon-feeding even vampires
quick-tempered fighter, loyal ally
cigarette clouds conceal his soul
argumentative, boisterous, sullen, shy, Crybaby, loving...
creatures of the night know
Beware his Shadow's Vengeance!
When love judges...
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I'm at over 60.000 words in my novel now and it still doesn't want to end ha ha ha ha ha. Maybe I should have called the 50.000 words Book One and what I am writing now Book Two . Maybe when I'll review what stuff I've written there I will shrink the whole thing again...
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12-06-2010, 10:39 AM |
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