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Another game, snowball poem
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-14-2010, 03:37 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-14-2010, 08:27 AM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-14-2010, 03:37 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically

inviting cravings and passions
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires

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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards

ecstasy
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
Next poem......

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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards

ecstasy

ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy. Icon_blaugh

i think we *done good* on this one. Icon_lol
(08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......

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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 10:46 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards

ecstasy

ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy. Icon_blaugh

i think we *done good* on this one. Icon_lol
(08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......

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driving rhythms

I had actually considered putting the word fulfillment as the last word as it can be considered in different lights. Then I decided on ecstasy as the same goes for it and I thought the word went better with the rest of what was in the poem. :)
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-17-2010, 07:28 AM)cathb Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 10:46 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:
(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards

ecstasy

ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy. Icon_blaugh

i think we *done good* on this one. Icon_lol
(08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......

VAMPS
driving rhythms

I had actually considered putting the word fulfillment as the last word as it can be considered in different lights. Then I decided on ecstasy as the same goes for it and I thought the word went better with the rest of what was in the poem. :)

exactly, that's what i meant. i do think Hyde might be a bit pleased with that description in poetic format. ^ ^ this is actually even more fun than the random story. greater structure forces one to be more precise about making a cohesive whole within the bounds of only 11 lines. very cool. Icon_biggrin
on to business... Icon_lol

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