mamikochan
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-14-2010, 03:37 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
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| 08-14-2010, 08:27 AM |
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cathb
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-14-2010, 08:27 AM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-14-2010, 03:37 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
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| 08-15-2010, 11:30 AM |
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derMauersegler
K.A.Z x Ponyo promotion queen
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
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| 08-16-2010, 05:09 AM |
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mamikochan
Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards
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| 08-16-2010, 01:39 PM |
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cathb
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards
ecstasy
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| 08-16-2010, 08:21 PM |
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cathb
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
Next poem......
VAMPS
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| 08-16-2010, 10:06 PM |
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mamikochan
Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote: (08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards
ecstasy
ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy. 
i think we *done good* on this one. 
(08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......
VAMPS
driving rhythms
(This post was last modified: 08-16-2010, 10:50 PM by mamikochan.)
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| 08-16-2010, 10:46 PM |
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derMauersegler
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
VAMPS
driving rhythms
screams from the
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| 08-17-2010, 02:12 AM |
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cathb
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-16-2010, 10:46 PM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote: (08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards
ecstasy
ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy.
i think we *done good* on this one.
(08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......
VAMPS
driving rhythms
I had actually considered putting the word fulfillment as the last word as it can be considered in different lights. Then I decided on ecstasy as the same goes for it and I thought the word went better with the rest of what was in the poem. :)
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| 08-17-2010, 07:28 AM |
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mamikochan
Charter Member-Oldest Living VAMPS Fans-
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RE: Another game, snowball poem
(08-17-2010, 07:28 AM)cathb Wrote: (08-16-2010, 10:46 PM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote: (08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote: (08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -
doe eyes
cherub's sweet smile
voice of an angel
but enticing tongue of Sin
sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents
slim hips that undulate hypnotically
inviting cravings and passions
dark forbidden desires
beckoning towards
ecstasy
ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy.
i think we *done good* on this one.
(08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......
VAMPS
driving rhythms
I had actually considered putting the word fulfillment as the last word as it can be considered in different lights. Then I decided on ecstasy as the same goes for it and I thought the word went better with the rest of what was in the poem. :)
exactly, that's what i meant. i do think Hyde might be a bit pleased with that description in poetic format. ^ ^ this is actually even more fun than the random story. greater structure forces one to be more precise about making a cohesive whole within the bounds of only 11 lines. very cool. 
on to business...
next line:
VAMPS
driving rhythms
screams from the
instruments echoed by throats
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| 08-17-2010, 08:48 AM |
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