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RE: Another game, snowball poem - mamikochan - 08-14-2010 (08-14-2010, 03:37 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -slim hips that undulate hypnotically RE: Another game, snowball poem - cathb - 08-15-2010 (08-14-2010, 08:27 AM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-14-2010, 03:37 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -slim hips that undulate hypnotically inviting cravings and passions RE: Another game, snowball poem - derMauersegler - 08-16-2010 Hyde - doe eyes cherub's sweet smile voice of an angel but enticing tongue of Sin sensual whispers crawl like tempting serpents slim hips that undulate hypnotically inviting cravings and passions dark forbidden desires RE: Another game, snowball poem - mamikochan - 08-16-2010 (08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -beckoning towards RE: Another game, snowball poem - cathb - 08-16-2010 (08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -beckoning towards ecstasy RE: Another game, snowball poem - cathb - 08-16-2010 Next poem...... VAMPS RE: Another game, snowball poem - mamikochan - 08-16-2010 (08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote:(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -beckoning towards ahhh! good ending. was thinking fulfillment-type thingie. that would be ecstasy. i think we *done good* on this one. (08-16-2010, 10:06 PM)cathb Wrote: Next poem......driving rhythms RE: Another game, snowball poem - derMauersegler - 08-17-2010 VAMPS driving rhythms screams from the RE: Another game, snowball poem - cathb - 08-17-2010 (08-16-2010, 10:46 PM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote:(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -beckoning towards I had actually considered putting the word fulfillment as the last word as it can be considered in different lights. Then I decided on ecstasy as the same goes for it and I thought the word went better with the rest of what was in the poem. :) RE: Another game, snowball poem - mamikochan - 08-17-2010 (08-17-2010, 07:28 AM)cathb Wrote:(08-16-2010, 10:46 PM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-16-2010, 08:21 PM)cathb Wrote:(08-16-2010, 01:39 PM)mamikochan Wrote:(08-16-2010, 05:09 AM)derMauersegler Wrote: Hyde -beckoning towards exactly, that's what i meant. i do think Hyde might be a bit pleased with that description in poetic format. ^ ^ this is actually even more fun than the random story. greater structure forces one to be more precise about making a cohesive whole within the bounds of only 11 lines. very cool. on to business... next line: VAMPS driving rhythms screams from the instruments echoed by throats |